Have you ever wondered the secret to making a really great impression? Let me tell you! You need snow with enough moisture to compact and mold to your shape. That’s it.
After a long week of hard work, I headed to the mountains with my friends to snowshoe. We had an amazing time. Sun, snow, wind, and lots and lots of fun. Maybe a little TOO much fun 🙂
I used my trusty four-wheel drive truck to get into the snow-covered parking lot, so that we could put on our snowshoes and head straight up the mountain. That was exactly what I needed! There’s something about the silence of the snow-draped trees. We passed some very fresh moose tracks. (Not the ice-cream kind, the kind made by moose feet.) I hope you love these pictures, because I dropped my phone far into the incredibly deep powder to take them!! (Don’t worry – I dug it out in the end!)
His worsening illness made travel difficult. Callonen wished for the strength to ride his horse as he always had instead of traveling in a carriage. At least his guards offered him the small kindness of not mentioning the change. No one spoke of his deteriorating physical condition. They all hoped he would get better. If he didn’t, Callonen’s death would affect the lives of every person in his empire. It wasn’t something anyone in Sarine wanted to face.
Now the carriage rolled toward the edge of the Warding, surrounded by a protective army. Sarine couldn’t afford to allow any harm to come to their emperor. Without him and the enchanted defense of the Warding, demons would destroy their people.
“Emperor, I think we should have ignored his message,” General Gray said from his seat opposite. “What could he possibly have to say that will aid us? It’s too dangerous for you to be so near the border.”
Callonen’s stomach clenched. The message from his traitorous brother had been unexpected in the extreme. Years ago, the last time they had spoken face to face, Haldreth had driven a dagger into Callonen’s heart. Only a miracle had saved him that day.
No, not a miracle. A young woman had saved him. She had loved him and given everything to save his life. The memory of Allia awoke a familiar sharp pain in his chest. For a moment, he concentrated on breathing, until he could speak again. “No. He will do nothing to aid us.”
“Then why should we hear what he has to say?” Gray protested. “He intends to destroy us. This whole meeting is probably a trap.”
“We won’t leave the Warding,” Callonen assured him. “For now, we still have the power to keep his deadlier servants out of our land. Maybe there will be something useful we can learn from what he says.”
The border, invisible to the human eye, was defined by lines of armed men on both sides. Outside, the heavily armed troops of Ara in blue uniforms and black armor congregated. Inside the protection of the Warding, Callonen’s men stood guard in orderly rows.
The carriage stopped. Callonen drew in a deep breath. How could he face his brother again after what Haldreth had done? He’d been a peaceful man all his life, but now Callonen felt the urge to attack his brother, to make him pay for the pain he’d caused. Haldreth deserved to die for the unspeakable crimes he’d committed.
Gray moved to the door and got out, turning back, subtly providing support to Callonen. As he stood upright, exhaustion dragged at his limbs, pain twisted through his muscles and joints. No matter how his body felt, he had come to face his brother. For a moment, he feared he couldn’t walk without aid. Gray remained close beside him, ready if that should be the case.
Callonen moved forward, one step and then another. His loyal soldiers dressed in dark green uniforms lined his path on either side. They were good men, every one of them. He would do what he had to do to protect them and the rest of his people.
Slowly, Callonen walked toward the front, trying to conceal his weakness as best he could. A familiar figure approached the border from the other side. Haldreth’s appearance hadn’t changed much. Dark hair and beard, their father’s brown eyes. He looked older, but he remained a mirror image of Callonen, his identical twin.
Callonen was the one who had changed. The illness had attacked his body, aging him prematurely. The changes were obvious now, as he faced his brother across the empty space between the soldiers, and he could see the triumph on Haldreth’s face.
“Callonen!” Haldreth called jovially. “It’s good to see you, brother!”
All of Callonen’s muscles clenched, tightening with a visceral need to attack. His jaw clenched back the words that threatened to flood out of him. You took Allia from me. I loved her and she was everything to me! I intended to marry her and spend the rest of my life cherishing her. He couldn’t prevent the words that escaped his lips. “Where is she?” Haldreth would hear the desperation he felt.
A long, awkward moment of silence fell. The soldiers stood perfectly still while Callonen faced his brother.
At first, Haldreth’s face betrayed no emotion. “Who?”
Callonen met his gaze, attempting to control the trembling in his hands.
Haldreth’s eyes widened in realization. “Oh, you’re talking about that kitchen maid who worked at the palace. The two of you were… friends.”
Hot rage flooded through Callonen and he struggled to keep his body still, his expression calm. Haldreth meant to goad him, to force him to lose what little control he had left.
Haldreth laughed coldly. “Let the past go, brother. Seventeen years is a long time to hold a grudge. I can’t believe you’re still asking about her. What was her name? Hannah, Leah…”
“Allia.” Callonen hadn’t spoken her name aloud in years. The pain was too great.
Haldreth smiled, slapping his thigh. “That’s right,” he rubbed his chin. “I remember now. Not the smartest girl. For some reason, she never would cooperate with me, no matter how I tried. She’s long gone.”
Callonen hadn’t thought his heart could hurt more, but the pain increased at his brother’s words. Haldreth had taken Allia, determined to control her for her power. He would have used any means to force her to his will.
“I didn’t ask you here to talk about her,” Haldreth said. “I wanted to know how you were. You don’t look well, brother.”
“No,” Callonen ground out. His brother knew that already.
Haldreth shook his head in mock sympathy. “That’s terrible. How long has this been going on? Probably about four months now?”
Fear, like a silver of ice, penetrated Callonen as everything came together at the words. Four months. “It’s a spell,” he gasped. He looked up at his brother. “You did the same thing to father, didn’t you? I should have realized.”
“Me? How could I affect our dear departed father’s health? I haven’t been in Sarine for years.”
“I saw your book before you left. An enchantment to cause someone to die of old age within a year. Father wasn’t even sixty, and he could have had many good years. How could you—” Callonen felt his knees weaken, and he swayed on his feet. Gray stepped closer and took his arm to support him.
Haldreth’s cold eyes bored into Callonen’s. “If you believe that’s true, then you know exactly how much time you have left. Just a few short months. We are family. I thought we should speak once more before it was all over. I think you already know that Allia gave birth to a child.”
Yes. Callonen had received that news from one of his best soldiers, wounded by Haldreth’s dark minions, dying of their poison. He won’t get the ring, or the child. I hid her where he won’t find her.
Allia’s child.
“You haven’t found her, have you?” Haldreth asked, his voice deceptively casual.
“I would never tell you where she is!”
Haldreth smiled. “So, you don’t know either. No matter. I sent my demons to hunt her. It’s only a matter of time before they find her.”
Callonen had sent many of his best people to search for the child over the years. They still searched. There seemed little hope they would find the girl before Haldreth’s unholy demons did.
“Dear brother,” Haldreth said, shaking his head, “why are you still fighting me? Sarine will be mine. You have nothing left. Give up. There’s no cure for your illness. You don’t have long anyway.”
Giving up made absolute sense after everything that had happened. Except for a single part Haldreth lied about. There was a cure for his condition. If they could find the ring, there would be hope.
Hope.
Haldreth nodded to his soldiers. Yelling, they drew their weapons and surged forward to attack.
And they lived happily ever after. NOOOOOOOO!!! What a terrible place to be. Not because I don’t love a happy ending, but because your wonderful journey is over, and now the book is done. As I see it, you have two choices. Option 1 – re-enter the real world (not preferred). Option 2 – find a new adventure to get involved in, ASAP!
It was wonderful to get out in the mountains this week. Sometimes when its cold, we get the urge to hibernate. I have been doing that or actually, hiberwriting. I have a meeting tomorrow to make a plan for the editing of two more books. I’m super excited to share them! In the meantime, some fresh air, exercise, and girl talk was just what I needed!
This activity is not for everyone! Maybe my taste in fun is a little unusual, but I’m about to confess something that I really enjoy. I rarely get seen as I do it, because I do it before dawn. Here in Northern Utah, where we can get some exciting winter storms, I wait for a really good one. You need 4-10 inches of new snow, and you have to get out before the plows have been through. I find a street with a nice hill, not too steep, not too flat. I trudge through the deep snow to the top, and then RUN down. It feels amazing. The deep, fresh snow catches you as you land with each step. That quantity of snow prevents your feet from slipping. 1-3 inches of snow will not catch your feet as you go, and 11-36 inches of snow will trip you, and you’ll fall on your face. (Entertaining for your friends, bad for forward progress.)
WARNING: Not intended to be used as life advice. Always consult your doctor before beginning any wild exercise program. Ice can hide beneath the snow, and injury can occur.
I have been writing like crazy on the sequel to Forgotten Rebellion, and I’m really liking the story! Here are a few rough draft descriptions. Which one most makes you want to read it? Feel free to answer, D – All of the above! More info soon!
A. A prince takes on a dangerous quest to find a lost king and his family in the barren desert. Their enemies are close behind them, and they will do anything to force them to give up the sacred tablet.
B. A sleeping god. A kingdom in danger. A quest to find a young woman protecting a secret heirloom. Attempting to force her to reveal its location, her enemies cast a deadly curse. Will she give up the hopes of restoring her nation in exchange for the cure, or face death?
C. Accused of murdering the man he tried to help, a young man on a quest to find the lost royal family tries to discover the identity of the killers before they strike again.
Dear Fellow Quester, if, in your travels, you have learned the precious, secret enchantment of DEFROST, please share it now!
It has been cold and snowy here in the Rocky Mountains. Great for skiing. Bad for driving. I have been taking advantage of indoor-friendly-weather to work on the sequel to Forgotten Rebellion. Maybe you had ideas for the sequel? If so, feel free to share. I went in an interesting new direction with the story:
A sleeping god, a lost princess cursed with blindness, and a young man who hopes that saving a nation will put to rest the demons of his past…
Sounds fun right? As always, it will have lots of adventure, action and some romance. I hope to have this version done in a few more days. Once I do my own round of edits, it’ll be off to the professional editing team!
In my defense, the cooking directions were written in Japanese.
It all began as I was trying to branch out a little into Asian cuisine, and I bought an assortment of different noodles. Most of them worked out pretty well, but somehow. These DID NOT. Maybe I didn’t prepare them correctly. They managed to be squishy, sticky, soft, and reeeeeaaaaallly rubbery ALL at the same time!
You know how you always tell your kids, “Don’t play with your food!” Well, this time I didn’t say it. She was better off playing with the noodles. At least it was funny. Better luck next dinnertime. I’m better at writing than cooking!
The absolute BEST thing about being a writer, is having book-lovers read and enjoy my work! I was so excited this morning to get an email from Back Shelf Books, listing Forgotten Rebellion as one of her Top 10 Best Books of the Year! I appreciate the support so much, and if you haven’t had a chance to read it yet, now is the time! Of course there will be a sequel soon. I’m busily writing it, right now, and I hope to be able to release it this spring. More info to come…